Advertising

[fourthgeek]

Hello guys. I'm (kind of) new here, I suppose.

I posted once, a proposed ad or logo for the NHFREE movement, you didn't seem to like it.

So, here's what I have concocted now:



It's a rough proof of concept, but since I cannot move to NH at the moment (hopefully I will be going next year if I am accepted to Dartmouth), I want to do whatever I can until then.

If you like it, I can make a larger more detailed version.

[Dreepa]

Dude that is sweet!

[fourthgeek]

I've got this too:



edit:

And, if I may...

New Hampshire Republican Democratic Authoritarian Party: Live in Fear or Die.

[aries]

Lookin good! 

[estoves]

I like the raised fists.

[Kat Kanning]

Cool

[fourthgeek]

fists are generally used for any revolutionary-style movement.

we can do guns, but i was attempting to stay somewhat nonviolent. perhaps a pack of c-4 and a stick of dynamite, then?

i'm all for the violent imagery but it might not reflect well on the movement.

since you guys seem to like it i'll make one (or a few) detailed/improved versions.

[tracysaboe]

The fists look unnatural. Like the arm is twisted as well or something.

It doesn't look right. (Unless the fist raisers are hyper-extending their forarms laterally or something.)

I'm not an artist, so I really don't know how to tell you how to fix it. . .

Perhaps I just read too many comics and notice things like that more then most.

Tracy

[fourthgeek]

Those are actually my fists, taken from photographs.

Perhaps I am deformed 

[FTL_Ian]

I like the second one a lot, but I prefer "Free Market" to "Capitalism".  Capitalism is misunderstood, no point in trying to save it.

[tracysaboe]

I prefer the 2nd one. Ditto to Ian.

The 2nd fist looks OK. but the 1st one looks weird. And the furthest back one looks twisted. Maybe you had your arm turned wierd, or maybe the lack of coulour palette distorts things.

I don't know.

Tracy

[Dreepa]

The back one is taken from the side...

Why is everyone giving him shit when he is trying to do something good?

Critical bastards.

[Russell Kanning]

I also agree that many of us have different visions of what the underground is or will be. If you want to use that artwork to advertise this website and such, I approve. But one of the features of this voluntary group, is I couldn't stop you if I tried.

[FTL_Ian]

The back one is taken from the side...

Why is everyone giving him shit when he is trying to do something good?

Critical bastards.

Everyone's a critic.  If you're going to go public with an idea, be prepared for critique.

[burnthebeautiful]

The three white fists make it seem like some sort of white power movement. But having multiple coloured fists would make it look like some sort of anti-racist movement.

In the second one the arrows don't make much sense, it's like they're pointing to Canada and Maine.