Help proofreading?

[Kat Kanning]

Thanks McPat!

And thanks to Caleb who's been looking at the printed copies.

[NC2NH]

Thanks, Hollywood!

You're welcome.

Another fine issue of the KFP you have there.

[Spencer]

If it is not too late . . .

In Notes from my Captivity:

my wife and I
my wife and me

and an more determined
and more determined

Fiscal Committee Accepts Fed Sucker-Money

$3 million dollar
3 million dollar OR $3 million

$3 million dollars
3 million dollars OR $3 million

The $3 million dollar grant
3 million dollar OR $3 million

drivers will no longer be allowed to use a middle initial on their license
drivers will no longer be allowed to use a middle initial on their licenses

gutted the bill in the Senate Chamber
gutted the bill in the Senate

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I love the KFP, BTW.

Spencer

[Kat Kanning]

Thanks, Spencer

[citizen_142002]

Viva la Keene Free Press!

[Kat Kanning]

Want to help proof again? 

http://www.soulawakenings.com/kfp091006.doc

Thanks!!

[Kat Kanning]

OK.  sending it off to the printers.

[Kat Kanning]

If anyone would like to proofread the latest issue, here it is

http://soulawakenings.com/kfp092506.doc

Thanks!

[NC2NH]

Dave's IRS protest, page 3, center column near bottom:
He says you can't record this; that would be against the law.  (needs quotation marks)

[Kat Kanning]

Thanks!!

[Kat Kanning]

Anyone feel like proofreading?

http://www.soulawakenings.com/kfp050107.pdf

Thanks!

[Quantrill]

bottom left of page 1 - obey of suffer
obey or suffer

During the Tilting at Windmills (bottom-left page 7)
(since you capitalized the event) it should read - During Tilting at Windmills

(also bottom-left page 7) speak him piece
speak his piece

Roger's camera
[It seems to be common to use the apostrophe this way, but technically it should be Rogers' camera]

(next paragraph)
It's not actually too bright
It's actually not too bright

He talked to the guy a while walking away
He talked to the guy while walking away

(Injustice for the Browns)
the prosecutors points
the prosecutors' points

they're order to present
they're ordered to present

,and file all back tax returns,
, file all back tax returns

[Kat Kanning]

Thank you very much Quantrill!!  I'm going to send it off to the printer's now.

[Kat Kanning]

http://keenefreepress.com/kfp090107.pdf

This is going to the printer's on Monday, if anyone feels like proofreading

[penguins4me]

Here're my suggestions:

Dave Ridley Harrassed:
"but woe be the" -> "but woe to the" or "but woe be to the"

"Another friend who was meeting with Dave" -> "Another friend who was to meet with Dave" or "Another friend who was waiting to meet with Dave"


Another Change for The Keene Free Press:
"and ask us to run an ad for you the print edition" -> "and ask us to run an ad for you, the print edition"


The Vanishing Right to Travel:
The paragraph headers are in the same format as the body text, which is somewhat confusing until the reader realizes what the disjointed phrases actually are. (e.g. "As old as the Magna Carta" through "The systematic destruction of a precious right"
(Side note - US travellers didn't need a passport to re-enter the USA until the 1950s?? Interesting.)