Help proofreading?

[Kat Kanning]

If anyone would like to help proof the next issue of Keene Free Press, here it is:

http://www.soulawakenings.com/kfp081006.doc

It'd be helpful if you just made notes on what's wrong...like "Its instead of It's used on page 6" rather than altering the file itself.

Thanks!
Kat

[Michael Fisher]

(I did not write the locations of most suggestions. Sorry. )


Seems to be a decent man who is most interested in the mission of protecting federal facilities.
(that sentence needs to be revised)

By Tom Tancredo
by Tom Tancredo

will study about
will learn about  OR  will study
(this mistake appears twice from a quote)

LSF address:
PO Box 443, Newmarket, NH 03857
P.O. Box 561, Antrim, NH 03440

The GNUHampshire ad appears to overlap some text.

Under the Nazis schools
Under the Nazis, schools

but what state
but which state

intervene in behalf
intervene on behalf

(If it weren't for the overwhelming media coverage of the Israeli-Lebanon conflict, I would wonder why anything about it is in this paper. In any case, it's a highly biased and lopsided article. A more fitting article would be about the Christian/Jewish/Islamic-backed governments all attempting to extend or strengthen their monopolies of force over that area for religious reasons, whereas such actions are a violation of all 3 religions. The power-hungry have power for this very purpose, and they're simply fulfilling their government job descriptions: to spread their monopolies of force over areas desirable to them.    But I doubt anyone has written such an article.)

(in upcoming events section)
home made
homemade
(matter of preference?)

(in outlaw grandma)
new year
New Year

[Viscid]

In the "Homeland Security Nabs Free Stater From his Keene Home" article:

Last Thursday, after announcing his intensions publicly,

intensions
intentions

Federal agent seized him again

agent
agents

[Kat Kanning]

Thank you very much, guys! 

[d_goddard]

it's a highly biased and lopsided article.

... which is one of the reasons I love and respect KFP.
Duplicitous rags (*cough* CM *cough*) post lopsided articles under the pretence that they are "fair and balanced."
It takes integrity to post a clearly opinionated article. KFP manages to do so, and doesn't even need to put a wishy washy disclaimer like "we don't agree with the content but we agree with free speech"; that sentiment of open expression above all else is evident in every square inch of the paper.

[d_goddard]

Page 1:
his intension publicly
his intention publicly



More later....

[Kat Kanning]

Thanks, got it.  The paper's off to the printer now.

[Tom Sawyer]

Damn Kat is a dynamo...


Staying busy gives me a positive outlet for negative energy.

[Kat Kanning]

Nothing like hard work to keep your spirits up. 

[Michael Fisher]

Staying busy gives me a positive outlet for negative energy.

Indeed! Responsibility is the key to happiness!

I'm planning to write an article about that topic. 

[Dave Ridley]

<<Note:  Russell Kanning was convicted on August 1st on 4 Class C Misdemeanors, all stemming from his refusal to comply with Federal demands.>>


Should read "..convicted on August 1st of four.."

[Kat Kanning]

Anyone want to help proofread again?

http://www.soulawakenings.com/kfp082506.doc

I'll be sending it to the printers on Thursday about 7:30am.

Any help would be much appreciated!

[NC2NH]

Anyone want to help proofread again?

http://www.soulawakenings.com/kfp082506.doc

I'll be sending it to the printers on Thursday about 7:30am.

Any help would be much appreciated!

Remembering the Alamo paragraph 2 "Germans" should be "German" and "Distain" should be "Disdain"

[Kat Kanning]

Thanks, Hollywood!

[Pat McCotter]

Notes from my Captivity
Paragraph 2 - His He is a short stocky
Paragraph 3 - I will be out someday and an am more determined

NH Law vs. Real-ID by D. Goddard
"Machine-readable Technology" section
Sentence 3 - and by which they can [be] read by unauthorized persons.

NH Law vs. Real-ID by D. Goddard
Sources section
The relevant New Hampshire law is RSA 263:40-a[.] The Federal Real-ID requirements are in Title II of Public Law 109-13[.]